Feedback on filming

24/02/14

The feedback we got was that the shots we captured were not linear. We need to have a stronger beginning of the title sequence and a much better ending. Leanne suggested that as our film is about the two characters not being able to meet each other and go on the date, due to an accident that the male character encounters, we should end the title sequence of the male character getting hit by a bus. She also stated that by adding a stronger beginning and end it will pro-long and give a better impact to our titles sequence. We agreed with Leanne and really liked her suggestion on the ending of the title sequence so we all went out after school when it was sunny and re-shot the beginning and ending of the title sequence. For the ending we went with Leanne's suggestion but for the beginning we went with an idea of our own which is the male character putting earphones in his ears and listening to music from his phone. We got the shot of Aaron getting hit by the bus by a shot of Aaron stepping off the pavement, shot of the bus coming and then a shot of Aaron's facial expression of him being shocked. This part we will edit out in a jump-cut style.  

Just by refining on the beginning and ending of our title sequence really made a difference as it made it more effective of the day in the sequence being really jolly and happy but all of a sudden the ending is a shock.